The Ghost of Death

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The hair on her neck prickled, she got a feeling that there was something hovering, weighing on her. She shook it off-she was NOT superstitious, forget she grew up under a superstitious mother. Still doing the dishes, she began to whistle a happy tune and bob her head from side to side.

Instantly startled by the heavy pounding on her apartment door, just behind her, she dropped the dish she was holding. For some reason, her heart pounded and the banging on her door persisted, a tiny voice whimpering ‘please, please, help me!! He’s coming’

She turned, heart pounding, frozen. But a force pulled her towards the door-what if, what if she could actually help? What if she put herself in danger? As thoughts raced in her head, she heard it again, a sob, a whimper, just against the door, please help….

She just got into action and unbolted the door; a small, disheveled girl pushed past her but that wasn’t the scary part, she was covered in red. She turned to stare at her, to ask the questions if her lips could utter them and the girl cried ‘he’s coming, he’s coming’

If only she knew then, what she knew now, she would have bolted out the door, herself, leaving the girl behind. She wouldn’t be staring at the hard unforgiving lid of a coffin. The clawing certainty she was going to die.

‘Who-o-o?’ she asked. There wasn’t need for an answer, the hair on the back of her neck prickled. This time, she didn’t feel a presence hovering. This time, the hot, sticky, heavy breath behind her neck was real.

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I’m sharing this post written by my friend who entered for a competition. Please vote for her by clicking here.Β 

PS: I dedicated the Fiction Friday Posts in November to my friends who wrote for the competition. Please be kind and vote for the stories you like. ❀

Thank you! πŸ™‚

Have a fabulous weekend!

~M.

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3 thoughts on “The Ghost of Death

    Light Ministry Blog said:
    November 29, 2016 at 10:19 PM

    This is a well written piece. I could see images dancing in my mind as I read it! Thanks for sharing it, M.

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      Dainty M responded:
      November 30, 2016 at 12:39 PM

      Lol. Thanks Steve! You always know how to make me smile πŸ™‚

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        Light Ministry Blog said:
        November 30, 2016 at 9:29 PM

        Thank you, that makes ME smile…

        πŸ™‚

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