Forsaken 2: Night Falls

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Lisa tried to adjust to the neon lights in the club a friend invited her to. She quickly spotted her friends who beckoned her to the bar. Sensitive parts of her, silently whispering enduring memories of the accident that had claimed her parents. Memories, writhed in a thorny knot inside her, struggling for expression, persistently stretching out through her mouth up into her mind so much that she didn’t need to be told to battle them back down with alcohol.

‘Give me your hardest drink!’ Lisa said to the bartender as she grabbed a stool. Throwing caution to the wind, she was set to drown her sorrows with alcohol.

Loud cheers from friends as she took the first two shots of tequila. In no time, she got into a drinking challenge with Andrew who had been watching her for a while.

‘Ten shots!’ he screamed at the bartender pointing to Lisa. ‘You win I pay’, he challenged. Shot after shot they drank with Andrew who gave up after only six shots and paid for the drinks as the challenge required.

Lisa gave a loud shout as she dropped the tenth empty glass. Her friends roared with excitement at her victorious conquest. ‘Here, take this. It takes away your worries’ Gordon, Lisa’s friend handed a pill.

‘What’s this?’ Lisa asked naively.

‘Just call her molly.’ Gordon replied with a wild grin.

The other friends laughed, knowing molly was another name for ecstasy. The drug that kept them on an all-time high.

Lisa hesitated at first until the crowd started cheering her on. Mouth open, she threw in the pill, and pushed it down with another shot of tequila which had suddenly become a pal to cherish. Grimacing, she squeezed the lime into her mouth savouring its sour taste. ‘Let’s get this party started!’ Lisa exclaimed with so much energy and enthusiasm. She had soon forgotten about the sorrow that had weighed her down for the past weeks.

Amazingly, Lisa came up with fantastic dance moves which left the crowd cheering and dancing along.

After a while, she felt lightheaded and everything seemed blurry.

‘I’ll be leaving now’ Lisa yelled across the room to her friends who couldn’t hear her against the blasting stereo.

‘Are you sure you can go on your own?’ They responded without an iota of concern.

Lisa gave a blind nod and headed toward the door. Unsure if it was a yes or no response. Bumping through people, she set out.

Lisa staggered her way home. There was no taxi in clear sight and the club wasn’t far from home she thought.

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She had not gone half way when she heard deafening sounds of gunshots blazing through the dark shadowy night. For what seemed like eternity, she was frozen in her tracks. Her eyes widened as the head lamps of a getaway van flashed across her face. Piercing through her inmost consciousness. She was in trouble and her drunk head could barely think of an escape route as the Van pulled up aggressively beside her. The screeching sound of the tyres clenched by the tooth of the brakes seemed to have woken her from a distant slumber.  The back door flew open right beside her.

‘Get in!’ he yelled pointing his gun at her. His masked face got Lisa uneasy and her mind flew at a sight of his bare brawny arm. Sweat trickled down her face despite the cold wind of winter as she sat still in the back seat of the old wagon. Everything was hazy, then blank- she fell unconscious with a thud on the back seat of the van.

© Mfon Etuk, 2015

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14 thoughts on “Forsaken 2: Night Falls

    olayinka said:
    July 4, 2015 at 8:40 AM

    Very captivating.Ride on girl

    Liked by 1 person

    Ogochukwu Nwosu said:
    July 4, 2015 at 8:58 PM

    Wow! Double wow!

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    funshbam said:
    July 5, 2015 at 5:29 PM

    Nice and intelligent story line

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    peequepoetry1 said:
    July 5, 2015 at 5:45 PM

    I’m liking this… Keep going.

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    Christine Vihishima said:
    July 10, 2015 at 4:00 PM

    You go girl!!!! You’re keeping me at the edge of my seat.

    Liked by 1 person

      Dainty M responded:
      July 13, 2015 at 1:38 PM

      Lol. Try not to fall off your seat dear 😉

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    eddy said:
    July 14, 2015 at 10:36 AM

    It’s like a move. Lol, shey ul start writing stories for nollywood, sorry Hollywood. Keep it up Dainty

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      Dainty M responded:
      July 14, 2015 at 1:33 PM

      Lol. Thanks sis for the support. God bless you! Hugs.

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    yougeecash said:
    July 17, 2015 at 4:44 PM

    Well done babe. Well done!

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      Dainty M responded:
      July 18, 2015 at 12:38 PM

      Thanks sis. God bless you. x

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